Monday, April 6, 2015

Blog #25: Final Research Paper with Title Page & Works Cited Page

I have read and understand the sections in the Student Handbook regarding Mason High School's Honesty/Cheating Policy. By affixing this statement to the title page of my paper, I am certifying that I have not cheated or plagiarized in the process of completing this assignment. If it is found that cheating and/or plagiarism did take place in the writing of this paper, I understand the possible consequences of the act, which could include a "0" on the paper, as well as an "F" as a final grade in the course.

Signed: _______________________ 
                        Peter Kociba
                                    English IV
                        Ms. Nichole Wilson

Peter Kociba
Ms. Nichole Wilson
English IV
April 2015
New World, New Rules
If we had a chance to live the future, today, but had to give up our humanity to do so, what would be our choice? Everyday people are given a choice – a choice to reach for their goals or do what makes them happy. In a perfect world, these would be one in the same. Aldous Huxley presents this utopian world in his book Brave New World, where the people are governed and trained in a totalitarian regime that not only ensures that people are happy, but also is able to control the behavior of each individual and keep society stable. Upon closer inspection of Today’s society, we are not any closer to this type of government.  
            First, the government controls how the people in the World State are born and are treated like products that need to go through a series of tests before being ‘shipped out’.  Instead of being naturally born, the World State uses a form of artificial birth to determine which child will be in what category of the caste system. Huxley generates "community" by dividing the population into segments, where the Alphas serve as intellectual superiors and Epsilons function as pure menial labor. In Brave New World, “[they] decant [their] babies as socialized human beings, as Alphas or Epsilons" (Huxley 13). Children are taught throughout their life to be happy with their caste so they have no desire to change. The basic ideas of society are also "wedded indissolubly before the child can speak. But wordless conditioning is crude and wholesale [...] for that there must be words, but words without reason" (Huxley 28).
Next, the government for the World State controls what Caste the baby will be born in and what its future job will be for the World State. In an experiment at the beginning of Chapter Two, one can notice how Delta babies are forced to learn “…what the psychologists used to call an 'instinctive' hatred of books and flowers” (Huxley 22). Their love for books and flowers may influence the efficiency of the lives The Controllers want humans to live. Deltas are trained to avoid roses and books by giving them electric shocks when they touch those items. Before they even know it, their freedom of choice and belief is eliminated. Psychologically, this conditioning also lowers these classes to the status of animals. They are trained to hate books in case they read something that might undesirably decondition one of their reflexes. They are taught to hate flowers, so that they will not spend too much time in the countryside, away from work and responsibilities. This again applies to the efficiency of the society. Alphas are given challenging jobs and Epsilons are given grunt work that would be boring for higher caste members. “Alphas are so conditioned that they do not have to be infantile in their emotional behavior. But that is all the more reason for their making a special effort to conform. It is their duty to be infantile, even against their inclination” (Huxley 98)."Stability" in their society is ensured through the limitations placed on the intelligence of each group.
In Brave New World, their happiness is only as limited as what they are told and the use of a special drug used to forget these emotions. The drug in question here is soma, a hallucinogen used by those in power to subdue the citizens in their society’s futuristic, totalitarian setting. It is described as "the perfect drug," with all the benefits with no drawbacks. The citizens of the "World State" have been conditioned to love the drug, and they use it to escape any momentary bouts of dissatisfaction. The problem, as The Savage identifies, is that the citizens are essentially enslaved by the drug and turned into mindless drones and are still prisoners of their own freedom. The hypnopædic platitude "Every one belongs to everyone else"(Huxley 47) is a great example of the sort of confinement we see in Brave New World. No one can be free because everyone is subject to the desires and urges of every other person through the conditioning and soma. How can we have freedom when we are considered property?
The society Huxley presents is based on many things, one of which is the desire to consume. The people have been conditioned in this manner. From the economic standpoint of the society, if people consume readily as they do, there will always be a need for jobs thus completing the supply and demand cycle. Huxley’s world was intended to be a future utopian society, but is in reality a dystopia. This reality to any human would be devastation for everything that people have worked for. People want to be free and the chance to feel. As the Savage put it, "I don't want comfort. I want God, I want poetry, I want real danger, I want freedom, [and] I want goodness. I want sin" (Huxley 240).
In today’s society, nobody has a right to limit anyone’s intelligence. Those who are intelligent enough will become what they desire, and their knowledge will be contributing towards the whole world. By conditioning the population to tell them to respect each other’s caste, and to be happy with their identity and the community they form, where the only reason for living is to benefit others, those freedoms are eliminated and no one is given a chance to choose, think, or change. They have stripped themselves to choose freely and give up a part of humanity by being created in a tube and look like everyone else instead of being born and really living.
As we grow up into adulthood, we would think that being able tell whether or not we are happy would be easier, but, judging our own happiness can be difficult. There is often a disconnection between what our brains tell us and what we actually feel.  In “How to Intentionally Design a Happier Life” by Elizabeth Segran wrote Paul Dolan, a professor at the London School of Economics, a government policy advisor and one of the world’s leading happiness scholars, says "We tell stories about the things we think should make us happy, but sometimes, when we look a bit closer, we are not really that happy at all"(Segran). He explains that landing the dream job or getting engaged can make us feel happy, but in reality, the negatives may not register to someone such as the co-workers are mean or anxious about tying the knot. It takes a lot of energy to be constantly thinking about whether or not we  are happy ourselves, which is why most of us adopt a philosophy about what goes into meaningful life—such as finding satisfying work, getting married, having kids—then we stop wondering whether we are happy. Dolan concluded that “thoughtful, driven people spend so long reflecting about what makes a meaningful life, they sometimes lose sight of what actually feels good to them on a daily basis” (Segran). To be happy, we make mistakes and learn from them such as making mistakes as a child. For example, children learn not to play with fire if they burn themselves once. One should not be taught to hate things that are not dangerous for their own health, otherwise these individuals are considered narrow minded and ignorant.
Arthur Brooks, author of “Free People are Happy People”, suggests that in order for us to be happy, we have to be free in our own society. Therefore freedom and happiness are connected. In 1976, an experiment was conducted to explain how freedom causes happiness, “Psychologists in Connecticut gave residents on one floor of a nursing home the freedom to decide which night of the week would be “movie night,” as well as the freedom to choose and care for the plants on their floor. On another floor of the same nursing home, residents did not receive these choices and responsibilities” (Brooks). The first group, which were no healthier or happier than the second when the experiment began, quickly showed more activity, greater awareness, and better moods.
As man has progressed through the ages, there has been, essentially, one purpose – to arrive at a utopian society. A society where everyone is happy, disease is nonexistent, and strife, anger, and sadness are unknown. Only happiness exists. Brave New World by Aldous Huxley counters this by showing that these items are not what the human soul really craves. In a utopian society, the individual is lost in the melting pot of semblance and world of disinterest. Huxley uses his knowledge of science along with his imagination to show how a utopian society would be pictured. In Brave New World, he removes individuality and has made happiness and the enjoyment of life into an artificial feeling with the constant presence of soma. Freedom is what makes people human and in a world where freedom the freedom of choice is taken away, feelings then disappear.
In the society of Brave New World, the population only know how to be conditionally happy and oblivious to the fact that their world is not a slice of heaven. According to Biswas-Diener and Kashdan, the secret of happiness is a concern of growing importance in the modern era. “We are no longer hunter-gatherers, so to speak, concerned with where to find the next kill, but in truth, we worry instead about how to live our best lives” (Biswas-Diener and Kashdan ). The fever to search for our happiness is encouraged by a growing body of research suggesting that “happiness does not just feel good but is good for you—it's been linked to all sorts of benefits, from higher earnings and better immune-system functioning to boosts in creativity” (Biswas-Diener and Kashdan ). The citizens of Brave New World's futuristic society are in a constant state of imprisonment. But because they have been conditioned to love their servitude, no one seems to have any problem with this.
Now we bring ourselves to the final question, “If we could live the future today, but in return had to give up our humanity and happiness to do so, what would be our choice?” Our thoughts would not be our own, nor would our actions. The people would be governed and trained in a totalitarian regime that not only ensures our happiness, but along with being able to control our behavior of each individual and keep society stable. We would be under the influence of false facts and drugs to a point where we are treated like animals. In today’s society, we choose what we do and what we think, which is what makes us human. Everyday people are given a choice – a choice to reach for their goals or do what makes them happy.

Works Cited
Biswas-Diener, Robert, and Todd B. Kashdan. "What Happy People Do Differently."       Psychology Today. N.p., 19 June 2014. Web. 27 Mar. 2015.
Brooks, Arthur C. "Free People Are Happy People." City Journal. N.p., Spring 2008. Web. 26      Mar. 2015.
Huxley, Aldous. Brave New World. New York: HarperCollins Publishers, Inc., 1932.
Keyes, Alan. "Freedom Means Having The Choice, Liberty Means Using It To Do            Right." The Daily Caller. N.p., 26 Feb. 2015. Web. 27 Mar. 2015.
Landau, Elizabeth. "Why Happiness Is Healthy - CNN.com." CNN. Cable News Network, 25      Dec. 2014. Web. 26 Mar. 2015.
Segran, Elizabeth. "How To Intentionally Design A Happier Life." Fast Company. Fast    Company & Inc, 12 Feb. 2015. Web.


Sunday, April 5, 2015

Blog #24: Research Proposal, Research Questions & Annotated Bibliography

RESEARCH PROPOSAL AND ANNOTATED BIBLIOGRAPHY OF BNW
Research Proposal: In Brave New World, scientists talk about the perfection of mankind and improving society, but the citizens don’t have a choice on how they improve it. The scientists take away the freedom to choose, and shows that no one is sad or unhappy with the lifestyle they were designed to live. My topic will be about the different perspectives of freedom in the World State and the Savage Reservation, as well as their goals.
Reasearch Questions:
1.     How important is freedom of choice?
2.     What does it mean to be human? 
3.     What are the ultimate goals of human society?

 Peter Kociba

Nichole Wilson
English IVB
25 March 2015

To be Human and To Be Free
Segran, Elizabeth. "How To Intentionally Design A Happier Life." Fast Company. Fast Company &   Inc, 12 Feb. 2015. Web.
As we grow up into adulthood, you would think we would be able tell whether or not we’re happy, but to tell you the truth, judging our own happiness can be difficult. There is often a disconnection between what our brains tell us and what we actually feel. Paul Dolan says "We tell stories about the things we think should make us happy, but sometimes, when we look a bit closer, we’re not really that happy at all." Perhaps you think you’re happy because you’ve just gotten engaged and after a series of best wishes, it may not register to you that you’re anxious about moving in with your partner. Therefore, Dolan concludes that thoughtful, driven people spend so long reflecting about what makes a meaningful life, they sometimes lose sight of what actually feels good to them on a daily basis, and ties with my research question of what being human means.
Landau, Elizabeth. "Why Happiness Is Healthy - CNN.com." CNN. Cable News Network, 25 Dec. 2014. Web. 26 Mar. 2015.
Happiness -- you know it when you see it, but it's hard to put it into words. You might call it a sense of well-being, optimism, or even life satisfaction. But whatever happiness is, we know that we want it, and that is just somehow good. We also know that we don't always have control over our happiness. The author suggests that happiness makes peoples’ lives much better and gives us the optimism for each day. In a study of people older than 60 who enjoyed life less were more likely to develop a disability. In other words, how we feel about life and ourselves affects how happy we feel in the future.
Brooks, Arthur C. "Free People Are Happy People." City Journal. N.p., Spring 2008. Web. 26 Mar. 2015.
Brooks suggests that in order for us to be happy, we have to be free. The earliest American definition of liberty is about constraints on personal actions: if I don’t hurt anybody else, I should be free to pursue my own will. The idea is that The Founders believed that freedom was one of at least three fundamental rights from God, along with life and the pursuit of happiness. These three rights are connected: not only does liberty, of course, depend on life, but the pursuit of happiness depends on liberty. In a way the freedoms and laws we have were to keep us happy and keep our slates clean.
 
Biswas-Diener, Robert, and Todd B. Kashdan. "What Happy People Do Differently." Psychology Today. N.p., 19 June 2014. Web. 27 Mar. 2015.
According to Biswas-Diener and Kashdan, the secret of happiness is a concern of growing importance in the modern era. We are no longer hunter-gatherers, so to speak, concerned with where to find the next kill, but in truth, we worry instead about how to live our best lives. In a study of more than 10,000 participants from 48 countries, psychologists Ed Diener of the University of Illinois at Urbana-Champaign and Shigehiro Oishi of the University of Virginia discovered that people from every corner of the globe rated happiness as being more important than other highly desirable personal outcomes, such as having meaning in life, becoming rich, and getting into heaven. This information helps tie together my research question of what the ultimate goals of humans in society.
 
Keyes, Alan. "Freedom Means Having The Choice, Liberty Means Using It To Do Right." The Daily Caller. N.p., 26 Feb. 2015. Web. 27 Mar. 2015.
According to Keyes, is that humanity abuses the power of freedom throughout our lives. Our nation wants order, but we also need happiness to balance the order. In other words, even though a government passes a new law, we can’t force this change on people who have a different set of morals and choices. For the research question on the importance of freedom of choice, it is expressed that we are given this right to express ourselves, yet others take advantage and abuse the power before them. We aim to bring the world together in peace, but our morals, greed, and our own choices in life that prevent us from moving forward.